Step 2: Be authentic and remind them why your product works
If you’ve ever wondered what to say in a follow-up email, you’re not alone. Many professionals search for best practices on how to write a follow-up email, but the truth is that nobody has a secret recipe.
However, we do want to point out an important ingredient: authenticity.
Have you ever read a follow-up email that sounds like it came directly from a form and was aimed at a mass audience? That’s because it probably was. And what do you do with that email? You delete it without reading it.
The crafty salesperson will take the extra few minutes to incorporate a human element into their follow-up emails—even if it’s templatized. Even though your emails should be short (three or four short paragraphs max), you can still add in personal details that extend the initial conversation you had with your prospect. Additionally, you really should try and include new information about your product and the benefits it provides in every part of your cadence.
Take a look at the follow-up email sample below:
“Hi Pam,
It was great speaking with you and Mr. Halpert today about Lucidchart! I’m so glad you feel that Dunder Mifflin could benefit from our software—we agree! It will definitely streamline processes and help your boss, Michael, get a better sense of everyone’s roles.
Here are the top value adds we discussed:
- Security and reliability—all documents are stored and encrypted on servers with no downtime.
- Easy to use—even your most “technophobic” workers will be able to use our drag-and-drop interface to create professional diagrams.
- Cloud-based mobility—our platform works on Windows, Mac, and Linux systems, as well as mobile devices.
When would be the best time to schedule a demo? I’d love to show you what else Lucidchart can do.
Best,
Mitchell
P.S. Snakes. Squash. Star Wars Episode VIII."
Why include the postscript?
We wanted to throw in a joke for fans of “The Office,” but in all seriousness, a postscript both personalizes the email and creates a sense of urgency.
Step 3: Create consistent, effective content that drives a goal
It doesn’t matter what your tone is—just ensure it’s consistent. In the follow-up email sample above, we used a very friendly but informative tone that lets the customer know that we a) remember and appreciate them for who they are and aren’t just another lead and b) we have a unique solution for their unique situation.
Keep the conversation going. Pick demos you know they’ll appreciate, showcase the dynamic range of your product. Good email content will offer something new every time.
Step 4: Use actionable language in subject lines
If you’ve developed a friendly yet professional rapport with your potential lead, your first follow-up email subject header doesn’t really need to be excessively creative. However, there are some tips to keep in mind as you continue to build your cadence within Lucidchart.
- Create a sense of urgency with each email. It doesn’t have to be “Dear Jim, sign up now before it’s too late!” However, you might want to mention exciting deals or packages available.
- Keep the subject line personal. No two subject lines should read the same. Also, adding the prospect’s name can go a long way in making the prospect feel that the email is personalized (as it should be) and not a form. Remember, you want them to realize you’re thinking about them.
- Keep the subject slightly mysterious and unique. Don’t give away your answer in the headline. Otherwise, why will they click?
- Offer an interesting story or noteworthy information. All your emails need to be relevant and less about you and your product. Rather, how can you and your product help your prospect? Why is this week’s offer different than last week?
Now you know the do’s when it comes to writing a follow-up email that actually gets read. Let’s talk quickly about the don’ts. Try to avoid the casual language that we find thrown around the office:
- Just circling back
- Just wanted to check in
- Wanting to touch back with you
- Just saying hi
Because let’s face it: we’re not just checking in—that’s something we do with distant family members. We have specific objectives and want to close the sale or determine if the prospect is no longer interested.
